your velo is way off. sure, youre syncing it with the music in some parts, but in others youre fastfowarding the replay at 200% speed and it just doesnt flow you feel? also you frames are kinda off, (as in your product gets really "framey" when you decrease the speed by a lot in a clip), and its really noticeable so play around with setting a bit. Its a good start. watch some tutorials and listen to what the people above said because they know a good amount about this stuff aight.
stay gucci