halloes, gonna repeat the skype thingy to get this into your potato-head for real now ;)
Well, spin from 380-300 really looks sheit, and that's the way it is. I know you like slower movement, but slow movement has crappy looking moves too, and I'm afraid this is one of them. I would also like for you to challenge yourself more when it comes to DM's. Getting 2 dm's with a grab-kick certainly doesn't take more than 5 minutes. Especially when you have all those other joints left to break that are so easily accessed just by changing the angle of your grab.
I know you can do better mate!
Madman part was neat, manip was kinda messy with hits and didn't get too much spin/movement.
And for some reason you still do that thing with stopping midmovement and then just keep going and redoing it. Try to get away from that since it ruins your flow.
Also wouldn't mind a Little speedup in movement overall.
Gj nonetheless
60 - A number of Generous Defaults
The opener was sick, very smooth and loved the little tap of Uke's head. i really like the little contract wrist for addition too ive always thought that looked slick.
I liked the start of the manip and how you got right up under him.
The end was unique and kinda caught me off guard, was expecting a series of boomhits or something, but the hacking addition was a creative touch.
Cool stuff!