I'll try to CnC without relying too much in drawing styles, since we have different ways to draw. If I'd do that, the first thing to complain would be the hair, but that's a matter of style.
From my view, the face is slightly off. The upper eyelid's fold and eyebrows aren't aligned, as seen from here:
I guess that the angle you have drawn her isn't low enough to hide her trapezius muscle:
There's also a missing ear, visible from this angle:
Isn't her belly button too deep?
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P.S.: amazing art dude
Last edited by cappuccino; Jul 10, 2017 at 01:46 PM.
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