aight
opener was flowy,but your arms are weird in it
split was decent,didn't like you standing on that extended ankle that much
grab was ok,but the fact that your kicking leg was contracted years before the kick isn't appealing
kick itself was messy and badly aimed
and that grab-twitch arm dm was really ew
the lumbar kick - your butt was too extended and your positioning looks weird there
floppy neck and that elbow danceoff thingy, didn't like that much either
you don't flow in your pose,you kinda struggle with it too much
pretty ok replay I'd say