You can make something more. I meant by that:
Boring Replays( I mean like always they only kill. Nothing like 4 players or replays made for video insted of just sending them to somebody or doing something artistic instead of just killing,dqing,pwning. )
Not Fitting Music
Whatever texts
with
No Effects at all

But for the first time video was ok.

Well here a long Feedback:


Grades

0 - Pure Suckage
1 - Very bad
2 - Still Bad
3 - Bad
4 - Under Average
5 - Good parts, bad Parts
6 - A Bit over Average
7 - Good
8 - Very Good
9 - Awesome
10 - Brilliant / Epic


Pro :

-The Music Choice was Brilliant, i never heard any better song in a Video!
-The Replays were kickass, mabye a lil' too much Players :/
-Not Owercrowded with Effects, simple, but exactly that fits perfect to this Vid

Neutral:

-A Bit Short for that many Players :/

Contra:

-Type Mistake "Echo Mrine", But i think this wont happen again
-A bit low Action, Some more madmans wouldn't be Bad :3, just 1 or 2 Dismemberments per replay are a bit low.


Famous Last Words:

Well, I like your Video, especcially because the song is ub3r smexy, and i never heard a more original Track, also for your first Vid its pretty nice, and i like it ;)

I Also commented it on youtube, so yeah, mabye comment my vid ha? ;)


Your Video is: 7.5! (+0.5 For First Video)



Good luck with Next videos, Nobuddie

Ooooh the temptation to low rate cos I never got a mention... ;)

It's the right way to look at it though, no body makes an incredible video 1st time. *waits for abuse from the Chezda fanboys*

K, points on the vid (ignoring typos etc)

1. ARGH! Game button! ESC twice to remove it.

2. Camera. It's a bit far out when you could be way closer, and the movement is a bit erratic & jerky. Turn down the sensitivity on the mouse's movement & try to do sweeping motions.

3. Remember to download people's textures.

I didn't see any lag on the replays, and they were running at a nice speed - but I didn't spot any obvious sync. I've no complaint about the replays. Intro was a bit meh.

Not bad, better vid next time. ^_^

Here is what I've told people. Theres a difference with replays and movies. With replays, you can go back, change angles, rewatch, etc. With movies you can't. Therefore, you have to present the replays. Show them off. It doesn't mean leave them there with bad angles. Since you're showing someone something, you want to make it a pleasing experience. Having discord between action and music is not pleasing, therefore sync. Theres plenty more, but I'm not going to write an essay.

Text, Music, Replays (some cool ones), Some okay camera.
6/10

Don't focus on, OMG Imma be like the best guys! Focus on what your movie needs.

Thanks for commenting guys!I'll try to use all this stuff in my next video.

I don't see anything wrong in this video.
Only thing is wrong was the spelling nothing else.
pretty good for a first video .
Never have see a cool first video maker like this lol.
The musics does fit the music.
I don't know why Danvari must go all rambo with that words.
I wonder if he can make some videos o.o.

Yeah no, this isn't epic. Good song, but you didn't use it's potential at all. It looks like it's made in windows movie maker.

Hehe...Yeah...It kinda is...I just cant download sony vagas or and Ulead videostudio.I need a good video editor.

But sainowar there have being peoples that have made epic video with only Movie Maker .
I think there even was a video in the ARt section if you can search it around you will find the post that the dude have made the video with movie maker.

4 of my sets
<3
you guys make me look good