Well wow.

User infracted himself for this post.
~C.

PREVIEW of FINAL product D:<

tori left foot needs to rotate clockwise about 70-90 degrees.
abs needs to rotate clockwise about 30 degrees, and then extend abs a bit.

Looks damn awesome!
Needs motion blur
I figured out a way to do really nice motion blur, set it to 2 frame animation, then animate as usual but make a massive gap between the two frames, eg, uke flys forward reallly far, and toris foot moves up really fast.
Then render/bake.
In your nodes editor set up a vector blur, and you will get a superly awesome picture! shhhhing!

However, i suggest duplicating both the toris, and leaving two in the final positions, so you get blur and then a super clear figure, instead of just a blurry figure.

EDIT: Ukes pose is epic, the face was an awesome idea!

as for you positioning input... no, i like how the heel to face fits in with the story, and this might not even be the final angle so if you want to see more face just hold on.
Other wise i will definitely try the motion blur, thanks!

The torso just looks a bit strange, and the foot looks kinda like it may be impossible/painful to do that.

Yeah, do a close up of the squished face :P

EDIT: An yeah, NOT SO MASSIVE! :P

Not too close, i still have to fit hampa, veb, 3vi1...etc

ah yeah true!

render it smaller for tests, or have links :P

remember that you can do an img inside a link, so when you click the image it goes to another image. So upload a smaller one (800:500), then link it too a big one!

Thats a very good bit of prose you got there

I'm guessing your teacher was sort of "wtf is this kid talking about" as they read it, but as someone who knows what you mean I thought it was pretty damn cool.

If it hasnt been done yet, someone should create the order of uke org. Then we could have the epic fights

Well, for a story written for English class, that wasn't very good IMO. It needed way more descriptive language. But, I guess you didn't have enough time to finish the whole thing if you did have all that. The fight could've been a lot longer and epic(er) though.

I might make a replay based on this if I feel like it.

Yeah, that was just day one of the writing, tonight I revise the hell out of it (and make the fight more epic, but I still want Tori to win with one kick)