Great sketch.
@Gorman: Sketch = unfinished piece of work. No need to burn through your paper for it.

Take a look back at the first post for almost finished product.

tis the shit mannnn! 9/10.


Send it to Panache! lol

Well this is weird steve. His hand is a little bit shapeless xD.

Oooh, I love it. Great job on it. I've never drawn that much, so I guess it looks good to me.

8/10

i think you could do the arm a little better

Here's what I did with your picture Steve.

A more accurate skecth would help, this sketch looks like it is in early development so an Sketch + Early Development means it shouldnt even be posted in the first place.

Work on your line work, the rough lines show that you can't handle a pencil correctly practice with your art teacher, (It will hurt , my hands are still shaking from my practice) it will give a better , more crisp result to your art, and even make it easier to make and finish a product.

I never use reference pics, but I think you may have used one on this, due to that it more work, observance of details, and more distinct, diverse, and creative shapes would help on this.

For this sketch 6/10

I think that the original sketch looks better.

I didn't change the original sketch, the second picture is shaky and has worse lighting. I just added onto the original.