Sorry. Another double post.
I just discovered that I dont have enough room on the first post to carry the character list. This space is now reserved for the characters.
Usermade Character list:
Type: Soul (By the way, Souls are people who escaped Kayne's grasp while on the way to judgement, and have learned to avoid him.)
Name: Not remembered. Jackal is his preferred name now. (edited from i'dinaer) (the silent one)
Age: He has been hiding from Kayne for 400 years.
Location:earth
Backstory: he(or she) was once a normal human, but was killed while trying to save his wife from a band of thieves. After dying, he and his now dead wife escaped from Kayne's hold and after experiance and learning, hid in places that blocked his ability to sense them. They chose not to move on because there was something they needed to find, something they needed to do... But it was forgotten, in a way. Balancing on the very edge of rememberance and forget. Forced to forever roam the earth, attempting to restore whatever had been tearing at their minds for nearly half a century. If only he could ask...
Personality: Powered by curiosity to discover who he had once been, and the thing that he and his wife needed to do. Nothing could stand in Jackal's way from this long, everlasting lust. Not even death.
Gender: generally accepted as male.
Appearance: medium height, including a foot of clearance beneath his dangling, semi-transparent feet. he has gray, wiry, shoulder length hair. His neck bears a gash from where the old 16th century knives tore through.
Weapon: none. in fact, no physical contact of any kind is possible...
Extra stuff: When the story is centered on Jackal, write it as Jackal is the narrarator of the story.
Type : Soul
Name: Asrah Alexander
Age: 19
Location: On the earth
Backstory: Asrah was a good guy who lived in a bad world. He used to be a policeman once. He was forced kill a dangerous guy who escaped from the jail for the public's safety.Asrah ran after the man, he got shot by one of his friends.A mistake...He died.
Kayne never showed up on his death. At the moment he had a heading on the location of Jackal, but in the end he never found him. Asrah used this chance to roam the earth in search of some form of revenge.
Personality: Asrah used to be a calm person, but now he is angry most of the time, and doesn't like being spoken to by angels or demons.
Gender: Male...
Appearance: A police uniform, long blonde hair and a gunshot wound in his chest. He bears many gashes from the heavy impact when he got shot.
Weapon: A pistol. Though it doesn't work, its good for bashing heads.
Name: Ashan. (Insanity)
Type of Character: King Demon
Age: 1933 years old.
Location: Hell.
Backstory: In life, Ashan's real name was Steve Matthews, a sour, dark individual who played on people's fears. Steve had been on the run for crimes he had committed, such as murder, rape, necrophilia and paedophilia. Having been on the run for the majority of his life, feeding his sick, insane desires, the people in which he had approached to keep him safe turned on him. It was more profitable to the anonymous gangsters to turn him over and receive the bounty on his head. The plan was taken up with the boss, who agreed to the betrayal, though he wanted more money than what was on offer. Steve was tortured and videos were sent to the police in return for a raised bounty. Figures and videos were sent to and fro until something was decided, by then, it was too late for Steve, who had been claimed by dementia and schizophrenia during the tortures. Unable to co-operate with the secret services, they locked him away and ended his life. This was where Kayne claimed him.
Personality: Batshit crazy, unpredictable, anxious.
Gender: Male (Spirit)
Appearance: Rugged, hunched appearance, bald, aside from the occasional whisps of white hair dotted around upon his head, his lower jaw, chest, upper thighs and upper arms are stripped of skin, showing his bare muscle and tendons, though, his chest muscle has been burrowed into, showing the ribcage and the hole in which his heart used to lie.
Weapon: None, though he can corrupt the minds of others less powerful and send them insane, nobody knows exactly what he does, but the victims beg him to be merciful. People are smart to run away as fast as they can if they come across Ashan along the streets of hell.
Extra stuff: Kayne's had a liking for him. During the time he spends in hell, he sometimes searches for a way to bring down the severe mental disorders Ashan has, so he can live as a more or less, content person in hell.
Name: Nehimop Lightmoon
Type of Character: Angel
Age: Appears to be 25. Is actually of unknown age.
Location: Heaven
Backstory: While alive, Nehimop's name was Peter Kriss. He was always very shy, but observant and smart. He always dreamt of being a famous pianist, but he was stopped by his overall personality(shy, dark, closed). During an orchestra, a crazed man comes in with a rapier, and starts killing everyone. Children, mothers, fathers, grandparents, until the knights come in. They chase him into the grand hallway of the castle, where he takes another woman as hostage and escapes their view, losing them. Nehimop had taken the stage exit to try and find some way to stop the man, and comes across him on the other side of the hallway. He notices an old golden crossbow on the wall, and thinking quickly, goes back and rips a tine out of his piano, and grabs the crossbow off of the wall. He shoots the man, saving many, many lives. As he asked if the woman was alright, the knights burst in, and without a second to gasp or object, he's stabbed through the stomach first, and then from another knight, through the heart. He died a hero, which is why he became an angel.
Personality: Shy, dark, introverse, observant, helpful, overcaring. But also brave and courageous.
Gender: Male (Angel)
Appearance: Curly, dark, long hair. Big, brown eyes. A very cold expression is always in his face. He wears a black and white garment, and his skin is in a flawless condition. He's buffed, about seven feet tall.
Weapon: A big crossbow. The bolts are made of various fused materials, making them nearly indestructible.
Extra stuff: Was once a victim to Ashan's mind tricks. But thanks to heaven's healing he regained full use of his mind again. The two are now deadly enemies.
My Characters Made so Far:
Type of Character: King Demon
Name: Kayne (Wrath)
Age: 2157
Location: Hell
Backstory: For the last few thousand years, Kayne has done duties as the Grim Reaper. Taking dead souls to be judged at the gates of Heaven, where it was decided if they went to heaven, or Hell. After years of sadness, Kayne developed a conscience, a heart, and actually turned into a nice person at times.
Personality: Kayne could be described as a kind old man, but if he gets angry, he'll have no problem taking you down or separating your head from your body with his scythe. If he wanted to, Kayne could be one of the deadliest in hell. Except that he'd much rather spend his time doing his job as the Reaper and doing the good he can rather than tearing soul's bodies limb from limb.
Gender: Male
Appearance: Picture how the Grim Reaper would be shown on a poster on a freaky halloween day, but instead of a skeleton and a mask, picture him as a beast. A wolf, maybe.
Weapon: Reaper Scythe
Other Details:
Name: Cindy Amhaim
Type of Character: Human
Age: 27
Location: New Jersey
Backstory: Working hard to make her living, Cindy works as a worker for some big company. Normally the job would be quite easy, but her boss pushes her hard with lots of reports and short deadlines. She has also been very aware of when he touches her breasts or other areas, but she's too afraid of losing her job to do anything about it.
Personality: Ever since she was a kid she had a dream that she would do whatever it took to get a good paying job so that she could have the money to make her kids happy and to do things that they wanted. Her family had been poor, and instead of saving up money for their trip to disneyland, they all saved up money for next week's groceries. Her past has made her strong.
Gender: Female
Appearance:
Weapon: A heavy purse?
Extra stuff: Enjoys wearing purple contacts to work. It looks very good on her, actually.
I just discovered that I dont have enough room on the first post to carry the character list. This space is now reserved for the characters.
Usermade Character list:
Type: Soul (By the way, Souls are people who escaped Kayne's grasp while on the way to judgement, and have learned to avoid him.)
Name: Not remembered. Jackal is his preferred name now. (edited from i'dinaer) (the silent one)
Age: He has been hiding from Kayne for 400 years.
Location:earth
Backstory: he(or she) was once a normal human, but was killed while trying to save his wife from a band of thieves. After dying, he and his now dead wife escaped from Kayne's hold and after experiance and learning, hid in places that blocked his ability to sense them. They chose not to move on because there was something they needed to find, something they needed to do... But it was forgotten, in a way. Balancing on the very edge of rememberance and forget. Forced to forever roam the earth, attempting to restore whatever had been tearing at their minds for nearly half a century. If only he could ask...
Personality: Powered by curiosity to discover who he had once been, and the thing that he and his wife needed to do. Nothing could stand in Jackal's way from this long, everlasting lust. Not even death.
Gender: generally accepted as male.
Appearance: medium height, including a foot of clearance beneath his dangling, semi-transparent feet. he has gray, wiry, shoulder length hair. His neck bears a gash from where the old 16th century knives tore through.
Weapon: none. in fact, no physical contact of any kind is possible...
Extra stuff: When the story is centered on Jackal, write it as Jackal is the narrarator of the story.
Type : Soul
Name: Asrah Alexander
Age: 19
Location: On the earth
Backstory: Asrah was a good guy who lived in a bad world. He used to be a policeman once. He was forced kill a dangerous guy who escaped from the jail for the public's safety.Asrah ran after the man, he got shot by one of his friends.A mistake...He died.
Kayne never showed up on his death. At the moment he had a heading on the location of Jackal, but in the end he never found him. Asrah used this chance to roam the earth in search of some form of revenge.
Personality: Asrah used to be a calm person, but now he is angry most of the time, and doesn't like being spoken to by angels or demons.
Gender: Male...
Appearance: A police uniform, long blonde hair and a gunshot wound in his chest. He bears many gashes from the heavy impact when he got shot.
Weapon: A pistol. Though it doesn't work, its good for bashing heads.
Name: Ashan. (Insanity)
Type of Character: King Demon
Age: 1933 years old.
Location: Hell.
Backstory: In life, Ashan's real name was Steve Matthews, a sour, dark individual who played on people's fears. Steve had been on the run for crimes he had committed, such as murder, rape, necrophilia and paedophilia. Having been on the run for the majority of his life, feeding his sick, insane desires, the people in which he had approached to keep him safe turned on him. It was more profitable to the anonymous gangsters to turn him over and receive the bounty on his head. The plan was taken up with the boss, who agreed to the betrayal, though he wanted more money than what was on offer. Steve was tortured and videos were sent to the police in return for a raised bounty. Figures and videos were sent to and fro until something was decided, by then, it was too late for Steve, who had been claimed by dementia and schizophrenia during the tortures. Unable to co-operate with the secret services, they locked him away and ended his life. This was where Kayne claimed him.
Personality: Batshit crazy, unpredictable, anxious.
Gender: Male (Spirit)
Appearance: Rugged, hunched appearance, bald, aside from the occasional whisps of white hair dotted around upon his head, his lower jaw, chest, upper thighs and upper arms are stripped of skin, showing his bare muscle and tendons, though, his chest muscle has been burrowed into, showing the ribcage and the hole in which his heart used to lie.
Weapon: None, though he can corrupt the minds of others less powerful and send them insane, nobody knows exactly what he does, but the victims beg him to be merciful. People are smart to run away as fast as they can if they come across Ashan along the streets of hell.
Extra stuff: Kayne's had a liking for him. During the time he spends in hell, he sometimes searches for a way to bring down the severe mental disorders Ashan has, so he can live as a more or less, content person in hell.
Name: Nehimop Lightmoon
Type of Character: Angel
Age: Appears to be 25. Is actually of unknown age.
Location: Heaven
Backstory: While alive, Nehimop's name was Peter Kriss. He was always very shy, but observant and smart. He always dreamt of being a famous pianist, but he was stopped by his overall personality(shy, dark, closed). During an orchestra, a crazed man comes in with a rapier, and starts killing everyone. Children, mothers, fathers, grandparents, until the knights come in. They chase him into the grand hallway of the castle, where he takes another woman as hostage and escapes their view, losing them. Nehimop had taken the stage exit to try and find some way to stop the man, and comes across him on the other side of the hallway. He notices an old golden crossbow on the wall, and thinking quickly, goes back and rips a tine out of his piano, and grabs the crossbow off of the wall. He shoots the man, saving many, many lives. As he asked if the woman was alright, the knights burst in, and without a second to gasp or object, he's stabbed through the stomach first, and then from another knight, through the heart. He died a hero, which is why he became an angel.
Personality: Shy, dark, introverse, observant, helpful, overcaring. But also brave and courageous.
Gender: Male (Angel)
Appearance: Curly, dark, long hair. Big, brown eyes. A very cold expression is always in his face. He wears a black and white garment, and his skin is in a flawless condition. He's buffed, about seven feet tall.
Weapon: A big crossbow. The bolts are made of various fused materials, making them nearly indestructible.
Extra stuff: Was once a victim to Ashan's mind tricks. But thanks to heaven's healing he regained full use of his mind again. The two are now deadly enemies.
My Characters Made so Far:
Type of Character: King Demon
Name: Kayne (Wrath)
Age: 2157
Location: Hell
Backstory: For the last few thousand years, Kayne has done duties as the Grim Reaper. Taking dead souls to be judged at the gates of Heaven, where it was decided if they went to heaven, or Hell. After years of sadness, Kayne developed a conscience, a heart, and actually turned into a nice person at times.
Personality: Kayne could be described as a kind old man, but if he gets angry, he'll have no problem taking you down or separating your head from your body with his scythe. If he wanted to, Kayne could be one of the deadliest in hell. Except that he'd much rather spend his time doing his job as the Reaper and doing the good he can rather than tearing soul's bodies limb from limb.
Gender: Male
Appearance: Picture how the Grim Reaper would be shown on a poster on a freaky halloween day, but instead of a skeleton and a mask, picture him as a beast. A wolf, maybe.
Weapon: Reaper Scythe
Other Details:
Name: Cindy Amhaim
Type of Character: Human
Age: 27
Location: New Jersey
Backstory: Working hard to make her living, Cindy works as a worker for some big company. Normally the job would be quite easy, but her boss pushes her hard with lots of reports and short deadlines. She has also been very aware of when he touches her breasts or other areas, but she's too afraid of losing her job to do anything about it.
Personality: Ever since she was a kid she had a dream that she would do whatever it took to get a good paying job so that she could have the money to make her kids happy and to do things that they wanted. Her family had been poor, and instead of saving up money for their trip to disneyland, they all saved up money for next week's groceries. Her past has made her strong.
Gender: Female
Appearance:
Weapon: A heavy purse?
Extra stuff: Enjoys wearing purple contacts to work. It looks very good on her, actually.
Last edited by Burden; Apr 17, 2009 at 08:25 AM.
Thank you. Im putting my all into this book.
Edit: Reserving this space in case its needed for more characters.
User made Characters:
Name: Ravenger (Normal Demon)
Age: 117
Location: Hell
Backstory: He was once a happy, middle-class business man who was perfectly content with his uneventful, married life. However, a week after the birth of his first child, his wife revealed that the child was not really his, but that she had found someone else she wished to spend her life with and they were leaving together. In a fit of confused rage, he killed her and subsequently went insane. He lost all interest in anything other than what he called "the fine art of making someone squirm at your feet", brutally torturing, and finally killing hapless victims in creative ways. After his murderous rampage was finally ended and he was tried and hanged, he continued his occupation in hell. His skills in torture has made him a feared force in hell. Only the stupid or the strong stand to fight him. He has always envied kayne and searches for some sort of way to take his position. One day he is sent on a mission "up top" to track down a certain young woman and torment her in ways that he can, hoping to shift her path down to hell. (Not even Satan can influence humans directly, but strong willed demons can influence thoughts and create temptations). He locates the girl only to realize that she is the great-grand-daughter of his late wife (the kind of cruel joke that the "higher ups" in hell enjoy most
). Seeing her, he finally snaps out of the insanity that has possessed him for so long and thinks that the one thing he might do to payback his wife for all the strife he caused is to ensure that the girl ends up in heaven instead. He remains with her, trying to influence all her actions for good instead, but when his boss hears about what he's up to, he sends out minions to capture and bring him back and then take care of the job he was sent to do. Ravenger must find out why this particular girl is so important to them if he is ever going to save her, but time is running out...
Personality: Think american psycho, slips with ease between normal, every day topics and murder.
Gender: Male
Appearance: He still wears the old business suit he had on the day he came home and killed his wife. Tall, dark, and (if not for the bloodstains and fiery eyes) handsome as well.
Weapon: he uses a myriad of... interesting weapons. knives, flails, crews, you name it
Extra stuff: *Deleted due to this not being usable.*
My Characters:
Edit: Reserving this space in case its needed for more characters.
User made Characters:
Name: Ravenger (Normal Demon)
Age: 117
Location: Hell
Backstory: He was once a happy, middle-class business man who was perfectly content with his uneventful, married life. However, a week after the birth of his first child, his wife revealed that the child was not really his, but that she had found someone else she wished to spend her life with and they were leaving together. In a fit of confused rage, he killed her and subsequently went insane. He lost all interest in anything other than what he called "the fine art of making someone squirm at your feet", brutally torturing, and finally killing hapless victims in creative ways. After his murderous rampage was finally ended and he was tried and hanged, he continued his occupation in hell. His skills in torture has made him a feared force in hell. Only the stupid or the strong stand to fight him. He has always envied kayne and searches for some sort of way to take his position. One day he is sent on a mission "up top" to track down a certain young woman and torment her in ways that he can, hoping to shift her path down to hell. (Not even Satan can influence humans directly, but strong willed demons can influence thoughts and create temptations). He locates the girl only to realize that she is the great-grand-daughter of his late wife (the kind of cruel joke that the "higher ups" in hell enjoy most
). Seeing her, he finally snaps out of the insanity that has possessed him for so long and thinks that the one thing he might do to payback his wife for all the strife he caused is to ensure that the girl ends up in heaven instead. He remains with her, trying to influence all her actions for good instead, but when his boss hears about what he's up to, he sends out minions to capture and bring him back and then take care of the job he was sent to do. Ravenger must find out why this particular girl is so important to them if he is ever going to save her, but time is running out...Personality: Think american psycho, slips with ease between normal, every day topics and murder.
Gender: Male
Appearance: He still wears the old business suit he had on the day he came home and killed his wife. Tall, dark, and (if not for the bloodstains and fiery eyes) handsome as well.
Weapon: he uses a myriad of... interesting weapons. knives, flails, crews, you name it
Extra stuff: *Deleted due to this not being usable.*
My Characters:
Last edited by Burden; Apr 17, 2009 at 07:06 AM.
Name: Nehimop Lightmoon
Age: Appears to be 25. Is actually of unknown age.
Location: Heaven
Backstory: While alive, Nehimop's name was Peter Kriss. He was always very shy, but observant and smart. He always dreamt of being a famous pianist, but he was stopped by his overall personality(shy, dark, closed).
Personality: Shy, dark, introverse, observant, helpful, overcaring.
Gender: Male (Angel)
Appearance: Curly, dark, long hair. Big, brown eyes. A very cold expression is always in his face. He wears a black and white garment, and his skin is in a flawless condition. He's buffed, about seven feet tall.
Weapon: A big crossbow. The bolts are made of various fused materials, making them nearly indestructible.
Extra stuff: I'm bad at backstories, so go ahead and edit one in. Would be cool if it was Ashan's enemy.
(Sorry for the incomplete back story. Could you PM me your MSN, if you have one? We could talk it over a bit and stuff.)
Age: Appears to be 25. Is actually of unknown age.
Location: Heaven
Backstory: While alive, Nehimop's name was Peter Kriss. He was always very shy, but observant and smart. He always dreamt of being a famous pianist, but he was stopped by his overall personality(shy, dark, closed).
Personality: Shy, dark, introverse, observant, helpful, overcaring.
Gender: Male (Angel)
Appearance: Curly, dark, long hair. Big, brown eyes. A very cold expression is always in his face. He wears a black and white garment, and his skin is in a flawless condition. He's buffed, about seven feet tall.
Weapon: A big crossbow. The bolts are made of various fused materials, making them nearly indestructible.
Extra stuff: I'm bad at backstories, so go ahead and edit one in. Would be cool if it was Ashan's enemy.
(Sorry for the incomplete back story. Could you PM me your MSN, if you have one? We could talk it over a bit and stuff.)
