the second one looks a bit out of proportion because i was trying to mimic refraction(the light bending when it passes through the water). i cant really get someone to pose for me because my sister lives in a different state and i havent seen my last gf in 3 years(that first one i drew is actually her, as best as i can remember). on the whole i'm just going to make them all darker and see if that will help this terrible scanner pick up any more detail. thanks for replying.
edit: i updated the first one(sized down the head a bit, worked on the lips, and just made it darker in general)
Eh, I have to agree - using your sister is a bit wierd,
Though I agree its natural.. Doesn't change the fact it would be extremely uncomfortable.
Using a good friend or girlfriend is fine, of just a reference picture of the internet.
eh I asked my sister if I was drawing a drawing like that if she would help she said "it would be perfectly fine" [offtopic]
[ontopic] the heads need more valume and detail and the bodys are ok but as some people said before they look wrong in shape. but other than that nice work.
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