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That was pretty damn good. The opener was rather stiff but the hits you did were great.
Why were you trying to not damage yourself at less than 5k?
Originally Posted by sprytryne View Post
Why were you trying to not damage yourself at less than 5k?

It was kind of a challenge, along with the no grab stuff. After you said I relied a lot on grab, I looked at my replays and realised I overuse grab too much, so now I'm trying to get used to no grab replays.
It was pretty fun, if you have time then trying to do a clean no grab replay can be really entertaining.
oh yeah
Opener was a bit random and not very flowish.

Kick was good, but you had your ankle contracted for the whole ride, try having it extended then contracting it on the way there. And your other leg was stiff.

Nice kick well placed. The head throw didn't seems very powerful, try making it look stronger, then you will have lots more extra momentum to make a faster and more complex ending.

The ending you have is very slow, and the pose was ew.
;p

so yeah good hits, but weak movement in many parts.
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Fine replay, again, the style was awesome (as always) but what I didn't like is there isn't something interesting. But it would have been better if you skeeted your hand to the torso instead of the head.
Still nice 8.75/10
Originally Posted by chamara View Post
there isn't something interesting

My thoughts exactly.


I think this one will be more interesting.
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oh yeah
Damn.

I really liked that opener very fast good flow.

Your arms were very stiff, as well as your legs but I think you were going for a numbers like replay so that's fine,but its just too stiff for me.

Manip was very well done, but when you did that wind mill thing you had your glutes extended for too long, and it slowed you down instead of build speed.

Transition was good

But the next hit was great stuff. It took a long time to break the glutes and all but you didn't move any other body part except your leg so it looked very weird.

Same for the next hit, the hit was nice, but you didn't move any of the other bodyparts which puts you in some weird positions, like when you have a fully contacted fully extended leg behind your back.

The decap kick was alright, but it was very stiff after and you should have followed through with the kick.

Pose was alright the wrist looked strange, and before you got there you were extremely stiff, relax a few knees or something to make the landing smoother and easier on the eyes.


Awesome hits, but keep in mind you have other body parts too

Edit: It's fine man, take as long as you like haha
Last edited by MrJingles; Oct 4, 2012 at 09:41 PM.
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Shit, that was great.

The only things I didn't like was the little facepalm at the 389th frame.

Other from that, just amazing.
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