I will try to record it.. but my voice isn't that good Greed.
Made some edits.. is it still correct? Especially: "in the end" instead of "at the end" ..
Originally Posted by TimmyboyG
A poem by Timmeh
I have lost myself on the way
Love was something I can't pay
In the end, lost sight of the start.
I lost myself, yet found my heart
Tons of people, left sometimes right
What once lived, is a dying light
And in the end, at the lost sight of the start.
I lost myself, yet found my heart
I wonder how this ride will end
In this live, broke, it has been spent
And in the end, lost sight of the start.
I lost myself, yet found my heart
At the lost sight of the start
I found my heart
What were my gains and what did I lose?
What will I be if I cant choose?
In the end, when everybody left
I found my heart, yet lost myself
Made some edits.. is it still correct? Especially: "in the end" instead of "at the end" ..
Originally Posted by BBKing
I will try to record it.. but my voice isn't that good Greed.
Made some edits.. is it still correct? Especially: "in the end" instead of "at the end" ..
Looks pretty good. Left and self dont really rhyme but you can work around that.
i am a bird now - Lil B
They do not rhyme but it feels comfortable.
