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Originally Posted by K0HTA View Post
Cabbage (fyi I'm naming you Cabbage).

I like raw cabbage.

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I look forwards to seeing your Tori vs Uke.

Originally Posted by Nagato9757 View Post
is your tori vs uke gonna be two females fighting each other to the death?

lol nope, a male Tori and Uke, not my Tori or Toriko and Ukeko. Similar like Uke I drew a while ago.

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I really enjoyed watching your art.
All these small details that make it so cute, love it

I bet you watch tons of anime dont you?
Welcome to the club!

Hey thanks.
Actually I don't watch a lot of anime, usually I got inspired by games, browsing other artist's drawings and strangely enough from music. If I recall correctly, when I reach my 20 I start to watch and read less anime and manga and only got interested to certain anime and manga. So don't even try to ask me about anime and manga that currently most of people watch and read, plus I don't like to following a trend(it's called a bandwagon right?).
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Tree... please...

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My friend said that the fence gonna looks better if it has outline. The tree still rip tho.

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Your friends right
the outline gives a rigidity feeling to it
put goddamn pants if you are walking outside xD
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The fence just keeps getting fencier!!


Gj on this one. Try to work on composition now. The background shouldn't be treated as something to fill the empty space. If you see some old artwork, the background usually tries to get you to see the focal point. It works in tandem with the foreground to create a better flowing image
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I like the idea of using two different eye colors, but I don't like that the brown eye doesn't stand out as much as the green eye. You need to make the eye color different for the brown one, the fact that it exactly matches the hair while the green one contrast against the hair just puts me off. Maybe switch the brown eye to a blue eye color, anything besides brown really.
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The background is flat thats why its rip i think xd
also i'd work on the mouth too
overall not bad, keep it up! (y)
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Originally Posted by Tricerafi View Post
Your friends right
the outline gives a rigidity feeling to it
put goddamn pants if you are walking outside xD

She wear something like a dress, lol. Maybe I need to make it longer, lol.

Originally Posted by Nagato9757 View Post
The fence just keeps getting fencier!!


Gj on this one. Try to work on composition now. The background shouldn't be treated as something to fill the empty space. If you see some old artwork, the background usually tries to get you to see the focal point. It works in tandem with the foreground to create a better flowing image

The background shouldn't be treated as something to fill the empty space.

Actually this is what I usually did, to fill the empty space. Now I know my mistake.
And also yeah, Sometimes when I make a drawing with background, my friend(who usually criticize me) said that my background with the character looks separated.
Thanks by the way.

Originally Posted by K0HTA View Post
I like the idea of using two different eye colors, but I don't like that the brown eye doesn't stand out as much as the green eye. You need to make the eye color different for the brown one, the fact that it exactly matches the hair while the green one contrast against the hair just puts me off. Maybe switch the brown eye to a blue eye color, anything besides brown really.

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The background is flat thats why its rip i think xd
also i'd work on the mouth too
overall not bad, keep it up! (y)

What do you want me to fix for the mouth by the way?
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The eyes look much better now. Feel free to change the colors to whatever you want, it doesn't have to be blue, but making that one eye brown like the hair would ruin the look.
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Originally Posted by Caveisier View Post

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What do you want me to fix for the mouth by the way?

idk Everything depends on your style.
I just thought that something small, closed and cute would suit it better.

btw. I really like the ears, so simple and awesome.
When i draw them they are usually too complex and charms too much attention compared to the face and thats bad
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Thought about an example how about something like Shiro from NGNL?
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Just a sketch.

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Actually was trying to draw using a style like in Tree of Savior, but failed, lol. The frill on the dress is pretty bad tho since I started being lazy when I reached that part.
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