One major thing I'm seeing is your movement switching. Most of the hits in the replay so far are very minor, subtracting from your flow rather than adding to it.
When attacking with a limb, you (most of the time) want to follow through completely, generating force that you can later use to your advantage.
That also doesn't have to apply to a contact hit; many of the kicks you performed in the beginning could be used to begin circular movement, effectively generating force.
Other than that, yes! You should definitely finish the replay, it has much room for a cool finish.