Ok, ready for some critisism
here I go
-shading-from what I can see, there is little to no shading, need to change that, anything without shading is crap
-style-needs to keep the same style throughout the set, the head doesn't match the arms or legs, arms don't match head or legs, and legs don't match head or arms
-copy-try to be unique, don't base your work off of someone elses, show so e creativity
-technical stuff -_-
1. Eyepatch-do you see that the string goes to the back but then just stops, you need to connect them
2. Tool choice-looks like you just threw a light color on it then did a smudge spam, not good, try to make batter choices
Lastly,3. Overall, it needs to be cleaner, as you can see, lines are not straight or regularly curved, they look like they were drawn on
I give it a 4/10 (sorry if I'm too harsh, but there is my reasoning ^^^)