Edited, I've retained the pause as it looks as though i'm preparing for the attack, which doesn't look too bad imo. Better?

Pretty good moves you got there. I really like how you've destroyed the leg to put him down and then jump on him to break the torso. Fluid movements, really good jumps. Simple replay, but not that much simple. Keep it up!

Hello, new replay.

That was sick m8 that replay deserves 10/10

the opener idea was good, but didnt look very attractive.
first punch looked kinda unnecessary, but it pushed uke in the air giving you what you wanted, so it's fine.
I have a feeling that you could've gotten a 3rd dm on the first kick. It looks decent, nonetheless.
The following punch looks almost unwanted, as if you didn't plan to punch there, but unexpectedly you did and it dm'd.
the boom was sexy, really.
pose was pretty good

All dm's there were planned out and intended, especially the first punch. I still wonder how a hit will look unnecessary. it perplexes me so.

Something I made a while back

Keep up the hard work Sprytryne. Will pay off with skill I bet

I like the opener it self but the Back kick thing didn't actually boomhit that Groin it actually just a dismember to the leg but overall i love it

10/10

ha

Opener is shit and the chestgrab killed too much momentum

Everything else is pure swag