ok. that's cool swer. what's that and where did u get that from?! :o
@fally: try to clean ur lines. try to do them in one time instead of starting everytime again. if u do it with a pencil it's ok. but when u are drawing them with an pencil (edding or somthing similar) try to use less start's to draw the line. this will make it look smoother. also u could think about putting the letters more closer but that's something u have to know by yourself. everyone likes it different. some like it if the letters look like nearly one mess, others want a clear difference (space) between them.
but nice one anyway! keep going, some more pls ;)