Liked the initial launch, the dms and the grabs, disliked giving up on the pose and sneaking out your foot breaking on the first hit.
Your launching is cool, you should at least try out a heavier gravity like -30 for this kind of madman if you haven't, you get a lot more opportunities to push off the floor. The replay twirly wirly in -15 was really nice, you got to hang around near the ground the whole time.