Today is the first time i read it since i just got home from school, very epic indeed. Murm on page 5 remind me of Rambo somehow....
I hope the story isn't like the same hero story like the "protagonist enter the tournament, save a pretty princess from big meanie monster, and they live happily ever after, the end". I see you are using toriworld themes and some famous people inside it, i bet this is gonna be big.
Hampafortress, lol.