Cool, when was the last time you made a replay?
The opener looked good, but your arm ghosted through your leg :c. A bit twitchy, try to avoid contracting or extending quickly. Maybe extend/contract for 1-3 frames, and relax. Also hold your neck more, looks better.
The hits were powerful, the second one was my favorite.
The pose was okay, but bend your knees a bit more. They were pretty stiff.
Overall, cool stuff. Keep at it o/