Well, that was a really amazing parkour.
I'll come back soon and give you some proper CnC but for now I'll give you the version with you in the correct place.
Sky is right. Your dreams are there. Go and get them. On a lonely island. So close you got, yet so far you stayed. Dont give up. Dont let your dreams be dreams.
oooo me likey.
but not the opener, it looks quite awkward with your lower body standing still for the first bit while your arms move.
I also kind of would have liked you to get the final hit on the head with your right legs, while going backwards.
Also twitching during the pose.