Toribash
Hollow:

sick opener, didn't like how you slowed down after you touched uke though
it kinda felt like you tried to manip but couldn't do it
the arm dm, though interesting felt unattractive to me
split was fine
last kick was just a shin kick, also it had boom potential
i didn't really try to make a manip coz whatever i get be what i do.
Attached Files
[Alpha][ Layz ][D].rpl (264.7 KB, 10 views)
Aadame:I'm very signaturable
It's just no one usues my shit .
another thing.made 2 vers.
Attached Files
[Alpha][ Kadohata ][M].rpl (312.5 KB, 7 views)
[Alpha][ kadohata v2 ][M].rpl (284.9 KB, 7 views)
Aadame:I'm very signaturable
It's just no one usues my shit .
Sup,Arph0. C:
[Alpha][ The Parasite ][M]
Da opener was not my liking but hot damn,transition to first lift kick was nice,it twitched a bit tho but unnoticed,second lift kick was a wow for me. The spin to take the right shoulder was nice,decap was swift and clean,grab to dm was eh,kick to the r. glute area was meh,2nd kick was cool,Kick after that was a little okay,I know you can boom it(the remaining torso parts) but you didn't,liked the way you ungrab and the remaining parts was just DMed.
Sj,Sickjob.
thx m8.the most of the dms was just luck :c and yeah i know the opener was suck af.
Aadame:I'm very signaturable
It's just no one usues my shit .