Originally Posted by LIFE
I edited your replay because i'm bad
it's cool how you could see the style change :o
life we should do a collab sp spar
where you do half the turn frames then I do the last 8U could be cool.
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but I just ended it badly; cnc harshly please I need every single little thing I did wrong or everylittle thing everyone sees that I did wrong because it still doesnt look right to me.
dont worry about cncing the flow I know it was aweful I'll be working on it.
Last edited by Micah; Aug 17, 2014 at 02:23 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
The main problem is the fact that most of your momentum was created with unrealistic jumps. You essentially kicked the floor to gain momentum where in reality you would just break your toes. I suggest using your arms and chest while keeping your feet flat on the floor to make movement. You will see a difference in terms if realism.
"An American monkey, after getting drunk on brandy, would never touch it again, and thus is much wiser than most men." ~Charles Darwin
