Lol thanks for the advice! Phant kept saying he was going to stop, and every time he said that, I attempted to stop and pose. When I was just about to pose each time however, he decided he was able to keep going. Hence the massive screw up after going up the planks, the jump to the other building, and the weird twirl around when finishing the replay. Thanks for the tips, I'll be sure to work on them when I get back!

hi Happy New Year
i applied to trickonary with this replay

happy new years

Happy New Year (I am always late with this kind of stuff).
I don't see anything wrong with the tricking replays.
My first multiplayer spar in a while and something I made because my internet was down.

the spar looked great, it almost feels like you're in kyles domain, with all his flames and stuff, and then you beat him in his own home, it reminds me of a boss battle! nice movement, very fluid, but you stop sometimes and although you stop fluidly, you should always keep some sort of good momentum. There was one big stop at around 1000 frames I think, the rest are very small, and more of a slow down than a stop. Other than that, very nice spar. 7.5/10

the madman I loved, creative opener, super powerful moves, and I don't think you did any grabs, which is impressive for the amount of power you dot into those two strikes. very nice, 7/10. would rate 8.5/10 if it was longer, it just feels too short for the amount of power you had, I would've loved for you to dismember him completely with a few well placed shots, or tear him limb from limb in the traditional madmans.


weapon spar with phant.

Karbn
[s] karbn and phant weapon spar 1.rpl
you are getting a lot better and that so so cool
your flow was perfect the ideas of your moves was
epic the spin was a little bit high but cool replay
8/10
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Instep
Instep vs Kyle.rpl
what i like about this that you starting sparring with slow moves
its good to be slow at the start of your toribash career
keep that until you get bored of being slow after that
BOOM= new legend instep
9/10
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Instep
Instep - M - Divergent.rpl
i got bored of your ground dms .-.
try to be faster man and try to get the dms in the air
4/10
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trying to madman or uke shit xD
cnc pls <3

The replay is great, but that last kick was really weak. The opener was nice and fast, but you slowed down a bit before the dm's.

And this is just a quick 2 hit combo.

nice madman there instep, love how u catch his head
at the end. Only flaw i think in my eyes would be the choppy
opener but thats no big deal. nice job instep.

Heres a pk i made

shikkumo
to be honest didnt like your parkour replay it was idk
but take more time in your stuff cuz that parkour replay wasn't in your level
of skills
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thanks Instep for the advices
this is the final look

looks really nice, the flow is beautiful only thing I didn't like is how you got the dm/boom? it wasn't very clean, I wish you had been able to make it more noticeable and direct. love the pose at the end, very nice :P

spar with veyne. eh, not bad, but not my best. also working on a parkour with jackseptceye, what do you think? it's on my alt that I use for sp stuff