No offense, but realistically, who will wear the shirt and why? You need some non-branded designs that the public will enjoy and want to wear.
there are actually quite a few people locally that I have seen with the shirt ;)
Its quite sad that people dont listen, As I said my style of drawing results in major distortions, there is a difference between "imperfections and distortions"
1st off Im not drawing in anyway realistically or by a reference which totally takes out the imperfection part , plus who even said that this resembled the way a certain person interprets a human being, realism on a low medium/field like shirts usually end up being mediocre work due to the rules and restrictions t-shirts hold. Which takes us to distortion/intentionally imperfect parts of a body which could be taken from anything, If you want me to draw realistically I can but that was not the purpose for me to make this design, it was simply just an easier/more drastic way to show a simple design on a shirt. Complexity on a t-shirt canvas results in cluttered areas which is not what is being looked at on a t-shirt. Tees are usually most effective when people are making a walking by glance at the shirt which is were simple designs make their killer blows. I've dragged on too much on the topic.
And I find the result is an ugly looking thing on the front of the tee shirt. But I like how the name looks.
Its quite sad that people dont listen, As I said my style of drawing results in major distortions, there is a difference between "imperfections and distortions"
1st off Im not drawing in anyway realistically or by a reference which totally takes out the imperfection part , plus who even said that this resembled the way a certain person interprets a human being, realism on a low medium/field like shirts usually end up being mediocre work due to the rules and restrictions t-shirts hold. Which takes us to distortion/intentionally imperfect parts of a body which could be taken from anything, If you want me to draw realistically I can but that was not the purpose for me to make this design, it was simply just an easier/more drastic way to show a simple design on a shirt. Complexity on a t-shirt canvas results in cluttered areas which is not what is being looked at on a t-shirt. Tees are usually most effective when people are making a walking by glance at the shirt which is were simple designs make their killer blows. I've dragged on too much on the topic.
How in the world is anything you've said in your past 2 post given me criticisms or anyway to improve? If people could point other things out instead of "I don't like the hands", "Omg, I totally agree this is total shit" pointing things that haven't been discussed would be great ;).