i don't know, the skeet looks weird, like it was slow and even though it dm'd.

Aiming is all you need, speed isn't a factor :v

New replay. Not fond of the first kick but I liked the ending.


New version.

http://www.box.net/shared/ozf5tu2db5

Updated that replay above, also have a new one.

http://www.box.net/shared/fqstemj6se

Perfect flow shuks i love it especially the last part where you boomed uke and sat down 10/10

The flow was really nice, the booms were awesome, even though the way you started the spin was kinda weird without momentum but then you pulled up speed after the decap and did that awesome kick.

overall its 7/10

Didn't love the opener but it was nice. The first kick was unique, and even though you don't care about booms, I think if you got that extra core, you could have gotten the crotch block with a better kick and finished with a better pose. Also I want to see some no-grab replays from you.

8-9/10, can't decide.

Well, first attempt at manip

http://www.box.net/shared/uvhl296sv99jtoeag0vk

I want comments on both replays :|

http://www.box.net/shared/0ea30tl3phjnkp0yhrq2

http://www.box.net/shared/uvhl296sv99jtoeag0vk

Undercover: It would have been more interesting to see you gain momentum, and jump over uke instead of spawning over him. It's kind of like cheating your way out of gaining momentum when you just fall on him. I also disliked the excessive grab in this. Try to stray away from grabbing more than one hit each, so let go after every strike.

Topsy Turnsy: The manipulation wasn't that great, you kind of pushed uke aside instead of incorporating something cool. Try to toss uke upwards, so you can position yourself under and wreak havoc. Also, the grab killed the flow of the replay, but that's mostly because of the positioning of uke from the manipulation (which you should have not let happen ). And the pose was ugly

Good stuff.

Not really supposed to post, but just because you should know, I had no control of the spot tori was in, it was larfen's event. But thanks for posting my fuzzy buddy