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I liked the opener in a way, but I didn't like that elbow hit on the head before the boom ( which was nice). During the jump after you ghosted your arm a lot which was bad and the hits weren't so powerful as expected and after that they became random. Not bad overall but not great either.
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I'm working on it.
EDIT: maybe the final edit.
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Last edited by Tessh; Oct 12, 2011 at 07:54 PM.
System Of a Down [Extreme]|LOP|RSO|MoA Dontclickhere!
Well, the beginning was nice and smooth, and the transition to the kick was very nice. You were a bit too close to make the kick look strong, but it was a good boom. But, the kick looked stiff. The second boom looked a little messy, and there was a potential boom in that last hit. Also, you may want to keep an eye on all of your joints. Look at your left arm for most of the replay. Notice how it has not moved, and it looks terribly stiff. Also, you ghosted at one point during the replay. That doesn't look good.

This was a good replay, no matter the flaws. Full of some good booms and somewhat smooth movement. You need to work on style a little, and work on your movement without being stiff.
Pretty much what demonz said.
The replay had a nice start, nice opener and a decent boom, but after that you get messy and really stiff.
try to work on your style and flow.
Do you really think you're in control
Not bad, but you could improve the run a bit more and try to jump before the vault and use the hand to a minimum. Also it looks quite bad that you held the left hand up for so long and stiff. Other than this it looked nice and a bit stylish.