Well, I'll be watching over your replays from now on. Cause I looked back and... I saw some horrible CnC.
Face the beast: Well... that was kind of...
Well, let me just say that you have a bit of the movement part down. NOW you need to practice on aim, style, and most of all: boomhits.
The opener was pretty good. When I saw it I felt as if it would be pretty decent replay. But then you slowly proved me wrong. The arm DM was unnecessary. And the rest after it was just.... Spammy. With openers like that you should always aim for the torso area. Yeah, grab his head, but then kick(or punch, if you're in that situation) him between his arms, or in the groin area. Also, try not to grab too much. The only time you can necessarily grab is when you're doing a boomhit. And when you get even better, start boomhitting without grabbing. I'm glad to see another player get into replay making. It's a great hobby on toribash. Keep on trying.