Here, some real CnC.
I liked the first boom it was well balanced and had good timing, the head passing was pretty good. I liked the way you moved and the end was cool.
You need to go a little faster with the headpassing, maybe. It was actually really good though. Try breaking more? It would look cooler and maybe longer replays so that you have time to do more. Anyways, all in all, I give it a 9/10.