Bumps are frowned upon? I think bumps are normal for replay threads.
On to your replay, the opener looked pretty stiff on the limbs. Mostly between 573-500. It looked rather robotic in the parts after raised your arm and contracted your knee. The split is good enough, but it looked weak. As if no impact were made. The following dms were ok, but with that setup, I think you could manage to do a boom there. The last kick is probably the best part of this replay but again, with that speed, you could fit in another dm along with those two dms.
Not bad, but not good either. It did follow a flow and you managed to not break it throughout the replay, but it lacked destruction or style. There's a lot of room for improvement, and I do think you will improve by time.
Last edited by Spry; Dec 29, 2012 at 07:53 AM.