Toribash
Your opener was a bit slow and uninteresting with being mostly motionless. The transition to your initial kick was surprisingly smooth. However you kinda kicked in a really weird fashion that I just didn't care for at all. Your grab immediately following was smooth enough but for how strong the second kick should have been you didn't deliver. A small amount of work could have made that a boom. ( Meaning your kick should have been vastly changed). As for the decap kick I have no issue. after that it should have ended. the leg assault made it a bit random and twithcy along with the random head throw that added nothing into the replay. Not too bad just keep working at is. oh and go cnc my shit replays cause no one will
I don't know how, but I started dismembering Uke flawlessly and then wanted to continue making a flawless madman, so I made this...
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Flawless victory.rpl (460.1 KB, 28 views)
skakavac - quick but nice looking opener,love the manip,especially that touch with your feet on uke's head. in the air you were "weird" dms were great all except that crotch kick. you could make it a boom and maybe add a skeet or something but overall looks great

where am i - opener is slow and twicthy
first kick is good considering the position you were in
second kick ok,third kick looks odd idk why,and you kept the same grab during the dms. pose is twitchy.

we need to talk - opener is meh
I absolutely love how you held uke with your hand in the air
first dm could have been faster and second one could be a boom
but still a great replay

i don't even know - opener again meh
during the punch your hands were really stiff
love the fake kick
don't like other dms
only the last three cause the were fast and cool

keep improving and I'll keep watching your thread