Hai
First thing I noticed: Floppy head. Get that fixed.
Anyways: Opener was okay, don't like how you dragged your right leg on the ground to get it into that position, though.
Let Uke go full relax, it looked kinda odd like this how your foot just stuck there. The grab and punch wasn't anything special, would have been cool if you went for a boomkick or something. Twitchy getting into the pose, but alright.