This may have been said before, I didn't bother to read all the comments but the eyes seem way to wide. If it's still possible to crop them, do it. Also, you might wanna do a bit of shadows on the lower side of the bandana as well (mainly on the back of the head). It might look deeper that way. Good luck.
the eyes are to far apart looks good though if could just put closer the eyes
It's a really nice try, however, you should try redoing the shadows, because they look... cheap. Shadows define a distance between two objects and in this case objects look too damn far away. You should also try defining a face form by adding some highlights. Also, the face looks, blury try adding some small 1-2 px. dark lines to sharpen the details. I really don't care if it's c/p but there are some random pixels left from inaccurate cutting, try zooming in and fixing it pixel by pixel. I would also remove the bandage from the back, it just doesn't look very appealing. Don't use simple brush when drawing the lines (unless you have a tablet). Use pen tool or polygonal lasso tool.
Last edited by Barreta; Jun 4, 2014 at 06:31 PM.
Do it with style or don't even bother doing it.