Toribash
My first boom i think
Opener was super generic, I feel like I've seen that exact punch 7 times.
Follow up isnt anything special, I feel like you had your hand out for a bit longer than would have been best. The kick isn't a boom by the way, a boom is 3dms+ Wouldn't have been to hard to turn it into a 3dm kick, feel like you got lazy.

Split cap is the same but with a neck dm and a pec dm instead of 2 pec dms, but with a not-so-good pose. maybe if you contracted your abs the pose would have been better.

im stupid
Opener is straight up jacked from larfen, would have been nice if you used an original opener, the fact you didnt get a dm with the first hit makes it look messy and amateur.
the first dm is ok I guess, looks odd though.
the first kick doesn't get a dm and looks pointless, the second kick is ok, would have liked it if it got a decap or something.
normally people dont like dms when it's slammed against the ground, but it looks ok,
Also didnt like how your neck was relaxed and bounced around.

spiny ending
pretty twitchy
try doing tricking in -30 grav otherwise it's not really impressive.

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Once again opener is generic
the grab kind of ruins it in my opinion, would have liked it if you had just thrown uke up more. then the really stiff kicks arent too good.
the pose is pre cool.








Try pressing E to edit replays, you made alot of mistakes that could have been removed by using E.
and use shift+p to progress the replay frame by frame
sorry to burst your bubble but this is editted but these are all wips and thats a dafe punch made by dafe for mushu not larfen larfen is just the lord of punches. thanks for the cnc
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