Toribash
Thank you CaptainJingles

Time for another one of THOSE replays.

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Idontwannahearnomore.rpl (165.2 KB, 10 views)
The Eastgrand Assassin..
Did this 5 minutes
Daaamn.
the opener was cool - the pause wasn't too long, so it looked p good
the extended ankles when jumping forwards looked a little weird, but eh.
i love the timing of the knee contraction, and the decap.
with that said, i don't like 362 - 260 at all.
the spin afterwards was cool, but the pose could have been better.
Did this 5 minutes.rpl: until the decap it was looking good, then everything got kinda messy, some work is missing there. Dont rush, its better if you take more time.
try relaxing a tad more or retaining some sort of movement whilst rotating, you look rather stiff if you don't let it dangle a little bit, y'know?