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Pros:
as usual, cool movements
i like the opener
decent flow
nice boom
Cons:
a bit slow
dms are not fun
no pose
Things you should do:
it's a cool replay, but a bit lacking relative to your earlier works, movement are enjoyable to watch IMO, but a bit stiff at the decap, maybe you could relax some unused joints, i like the transition to boom, i thought it's going to kill the flow but it doesn't, the whole replay is a bit slow for my taste but you did get really good speeds at the boom. Didn't like it that much, you could do better, 6.5/10
Pros:
as usual, cool movements
i like the opener
decent flow
nice boom
Cons:
a bit slow
dms are not fun
no pose
Things you should do:
it's a cool replay, but a bit lacking relative to your earlier works, movement are enjoyable to watch IMO, but a bit stiff at the decap, maybe you could relax some unused joints, i like the transition to boom, i thought it's going to kill the flow but it doesn't, the whole replay is a bit slow for my taste but you did get really good speeds at the boom. Didn't like it that much, you could do better, 6.5/10
"Seasoning that chicken" (lol)
I still think your movement is weird, but I like the DM's. But you could've done more in dem last 100 frames.
I still think your movement is weird, but I like the DM's. But you could've done more in dem last 100 frames.
really good stuff man
Pre jump:
I thought you were gonna use a generic opener from the first 50 frames but you changed it to a knee spin. During the knee spin, you should of kept the right hip contracted a bit more. Play around with your lumbar because seeing it constantly to the right looks unnatural. Also lets you rotate more and in turn gain more momentum.
Post jump:
I don't really like the way your arms were extended the whole way through the opener. I think you could of relaxed your right elbow at frame 350 without hindering momentum. However, I do love it when people raise and lower shoulders. Looks practical, is practical and adds to the replay. Would've loved an extra spin before the knee dismember, but it would've been hard to position post spin. The knee dismember was clean and looked powerful. Glad you managed to keep your speed after the DM. It's hard to do that unless you flat out ghost.
Post dismember:
Didn't really enjoy the contracted neck. I just don't like contracted necks at all because it looks forced. You can argue extended necks also look forced, but in my opinion, it's still better than a constant contracted neck. The decapitation was badly aimed. I think if you aimed a little higher, you may have been able to hit uke's neck as well as keep your momentum. In turn, the replay would've looked a lot different. In your defence, replay making won't always go your way and it looks like you won't be able to do the above.
Pre boomhit:
I feel you could've continued that helicopter movement in some way, shape or form. Would've looked excellent if you did. Regardless, I thought the replay would look better if you continued the rotation at frame 240 by contracting the pec instead of extending it. Would also give you the possibility of a bigger boom because kick forward is most of the time more powerful than kicking backwards as well as the fact that you would've continued the flow. Still, great boomhit.
Post boomhit:
No pose. Not a big problem considering your positioning post boomhit was almost impossible to pose with. Still had the momentum of the boomhit so it would've made hit harder.
General tips:
Pre jump:
I thought you were gonna use a generic opener from the first 50 frames but you changed it to a knee spin. During the knee spin, you should of kept the right hip contracted a bit more. Play around with your lumbar because seeing it constantly to the right looks unnatural. Also lets you rotate more and in turn gain more momentum.
Post jump:
I don't really like the way your arms were extended the whole way through the opener. I think you could of relaxed your right elbow at frame 350 without hindering momentum. However, I do love it when people raise and lower shoulders. Looks practical, is practical and adds to the replay. Would've loved an extra spin before the knee dismember, but it would've been hard to position post spin. The knee dismember was clean and looked powerful. Glad you managed to keep your speed after the DM. It's hard to do that unless you flat out ghost.
Post dismember:
Didn't really enjoy the contracted neck. I just don't like contracted necks at all because it looks forced. You can argue extended necks also look forced, but in my opinion, it's still better than a constant contracted neck. The decapitation was badly aimed. I think if you aimed a little higher, you may have been able to hit uke's neck as well as keep your momentum. In turn, the replay would've looked a lot different. In your defence, replay making won't always go your way and it looks like you won't be able to do the above.
Pre boomhit:
I feel you could've continued that helicopter movement in some way, shape or form. Would've looked excellent if you did. Regardless, I thought the replay would look better if you continued the rotation at frame 240 by contracting the pec instead of extending it. Would also give you the possibility of a bigger boom because kick forward is most of the time more powerful than kicking backwards as well as the fact that you would've continued the flow. Still, great boomhit.
Post boomhit:
No pose. Not a big problem considering your positioning post boomhit was almost impossible to pose with. Still had the momentum of the boomhit so it would've made hit harder.
General tips:
- As a tip for posing: Try to completely stop your momentum. Make your final hit so big that it just cancels out all movement throughout your body.
- Aim directly at joints to ensure your momentum is continued throughout the replay.
- Keep it up man!
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