I think skin is tooooo dark. Personally i see this as a much lighter skin tone with darker spots around here and there. ike iawsome says around the eyer, and coming on side of he's face.
Also eye white much whiter for contrast. The iris much brighter. I suggest u use a rlly neat texture for the helm because the scales are just to well made so you need to do it at least as good as that.
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Oh, and since i see u so much want to incorporate dragons. My first idea for this event was a head from witch dragons are eating.
Small dagon eats from one eye or something. Kinda inn this possition but mapped on the head from side to side on the back of the head.

thts a nice idea insanity you should go for it

update crown to be added later

why does wip 5 have a weird grey thing in the head flat but not in game?

that thing is ugly anyway lol

it looks amazing tho

me like the progress
eye is cool, mouth is cool
maybe stick some teeth in there
the chin looks weired
maybe from mapping or idk if u notice that somehere around the middle the is some miss mapping. also right part of chin has some small issues
idk what point have thouse stains on right cheek. Thats from the texure of the helm so idk if they should be on the skin to.
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also on ingame pic eyes look to far appart