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opener by Raywill135

Don't know how muich of the oepner was raywill but everything before the dms was pretty sweet. I just don't like the lack of momentum. The dms weren't very powerful and were executed from a very awkward position. Try to get some buildup for it and try not to make it look forced. Ech

whoops..
i forgot to upload the replay with the RayWill opener..
well..
here it is.











i'm a dumbass

haHA that opener was actually made by ME i THINK it could have also been a part of some sort of opener CHALLENGE im not SURE if it IS my opener THOUGH its completly FINE none of this is sarcastic btw i really dont mind

alright so great opener B)
the manipulation is pretty nice but you reversed your momentum pretty suddenly by grabbing onto uke, the boom was ok but i feel you couldve done something else in the replay like attack his lower body or just dance around a bit
so yeah

The legend himself.
BQUADZ!
*fanboy autistic screeching*
mmk
i'm shiot

The start isn't too bad, just try and make it a decap at least rather than a shitty shoulder dm so it looks intentional

Try and make sure to KEEP that momentum going rather than just turning and ruining it.
You have a good thing going, don't lose it.

Overall finish this, I'd like to see the final replay.

Bump.
I can't make replays or continue WIPs because my laptop is take away back to its place (My Mom's workplace).
So I'm basically dead in-game. Yeah.