I'm not sure what they want you to improve on, but I would suggest the following things. You should get a few more posts
Dragono Fast farward 56 secconds into this song.
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Masterx2 # stop posting in here, you have been rejected, and thats final!
If you dont fill out the forms as they are suposed to be filled out.. You will be rejected..
for those who are completely retarded ill show you how..
Now I'm gonna fill out a form.. :O So you all can see how its should be done.