I don't manjo of furry shit but I can try to.
I can post my progress here when I start doing if you want.
btw there's an update:
Added: Linework skin, color sample, and this hair thing I don't know how is called (braids I guess).
Removed: The two additional tips of the hair fringe (the last tip on the left and the last tip on the right).
Fixed: The only shown hair tip, practically the whole hand (still have to fix the hand linework), shape of the head and this hair thing on the side of her head (left when seen, on her right), and her left eye line work was more accurate.