Veliar:
remade version of still rusty point one:
opener was pretty awesome, and I think the plan is great, but head kick could have a little more flare on it if you know what I mean.
transition was bad, you didn't do anything really.
Didn't like the tricking at the end sorry.
pose was good though!
nostalgia core:
Nice run, it had a lot of style in it.
kick was cool, but it would be great if you got more speed and power into it.
transition could be better.
the decap surprised me, good job on that.
sweet pose too.
I lvoe cores:
At the start of the run, your arms were rather stiff and didn't look too good. Once you got into it though, it became much better.
that tricking decap was really well done, but it looked like you just grazed him which made it look a little weak.
jump to the back kick was meh, but the kick itself wasn't too bad.
The kick after that flowed in perfectly, good job.
the punch was decent, could be better though.
I liked the last bit, it was well done.
You are a really good replay maker, I love your style, and I enjoyed your runs and tricks but you need you work on your power, and transitions. Also at ormo, we are looking for wow factors, things that will separate you from the other applicants. I want to see that from you.
So as you already guessed its a
no.
But good luck on your next app if you choose to do so!
Last edited by MrJingles; Nov 30, 2013 at 08:34 PM.