Originally Posted by
Tessh
It is nice and simple. I like it much. There is just one little detail, which doesn't suite in.
Uke's head isn't completely in picture. I think picture should include completely both uke and tori, if it doesn't have special meaning for it.
In this I can't see the reason.
Everything else seems to do well and the red X in extreme balance well with boom hit in chest and your ribs
Ba.ckground is better than last one and it doesn't include anything bad.
Great job man. ^^
Last edited by NinjaTitan; Jan 22, 2012 at 10:42 PM.