HTOTM: FUSION
Originally Posted by Dupbuck View Post
Since my post is glitched as hell, i'll just post them all again

NOBODY USES THE # TAG BEFORE REPLAYS EXCEPT ME ALRIGHT

I say no, you are pretty messy overall and you still use grabs to do dms, which is bad. Your overall control is okay, but you need to work on your style more. For instance, you spend too much time with extended glutes and that doesn't look nice.

Your openers are also a bit weird looking.
Merry Jizzmas
Attached Files
Potato - No. 3.rpl (193.1 KB, 18 views)
Potato - No.1.rpl (269.1 KB, 21 views)
Potato - No.4.rpl (164.3 KB, 10 views)
Last edited by ManlyPotato; Dec 22, 2013 at 10:09 PM.
<BISH> kick chan my modes are moving on their own~
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Originally Posted by poop View Post
I like to think im a breakdancer ;w;

Singleplayer replays dude.

This org isn't exactly based on multiplayer replays.

As for the quality of the replays, still a no
Sold my dog to join RRO
Originally Posted by Dupbuck View Post
Since my post is glitched as hell, i'll just post them all again

Ruler of time had cool movement but that's about it very anticlimactic.
wow = no

Movement sucks was really cool movement included. Opener wasn't very creative but its alright
wow = close but no cigar

Badass monkeys movement wasn't up to par to the other replays and just overall wasn't very great.
wow = no

declined sorry

Originally Posted by ManlyPotato View Post
Merry Jizzmas

You have improved so much over all your applications

No. 3 Opener was quite odd but it did what you wanted to do (if you got that crotchblock it would make it alot better imo)
The hit after that was sort of lackluster the crotchhit -> chesthit thing has been overdone.

what made this replay was the way you transitioned to the other hits.
the other hits where cool tho
wow = SO CLOSE

No.4 was really messy and very 'grabby' especially with those small hits it doesn't really compensate.
wow = no

No.1 is your best replay out of the application hits where awesome as well as the skeet. you really didn't move very much which is kinda boring but I think the way you dm'd compensated for it
wow = yes

you are sooo close to being WOW worthy just keep on working on your replays because you are very close.

Declined :' (
Originally Posted by TMinster View Post
hello.

T.W.C is an opener challenge, which is I think is allowed right?

Sorry for the ambiguous No

but nothing was very impressive but atleast I can see improvement.
Originally Posted by FreeFlash View Post
I thought I might apply as well...

Just a flash wound The manip could have been sooo much better, here is a tip try not to change directions of uke it makes it look kinda gross
wow = no

flipping noodles had the same problems except you grabbed before you dm'd

try to never grab on a manip untill you dm. only few can do it correctly.
wow = no

September ends looked like you didn't have any control and the gravity was bringing you down.
wow = no

Declined



I asked shook if I could clean up some of the apps
I really, REALLY want to pretend that I did not post an app 5 days ago. I used really shitty replays and I would feel a lot better if I got rejected with these ones instead :P So ORMO app redux kgo.

Edit: Internet spotted that uke was accidentally moved, so I fixed the hit.
Attached Files
Potato - No.6.rpl (211.4 KB, 21 views)
Potato - No.8.rpl (202.0 KB, 26 views)
Potato - No.1.rpl (269.1 KB, 12 views)
Potato - No.8 fixed.rpl (84.6 KB, 15 views)
Last edited by ManlyPotato; Dec 28, 2013 at 12:05 AM.
<BISH> kick chan my modes are moving on their own~
<Shook> FLAGGOTS
replace the last replay

and did you move uke on number 8 by accident or on purpose?
I understand you had alot of trouble on that first hit
Uke was moved? Well, shit. I fixed it just now so check me app again please
Last edited by ManlyPotato; Dec 27, 2013 at 07:29 PM.
<BISH> kick chan my modes are moving on their own~
<Shook> FLAGGOTS