Ok, The opener was slow but its ok.
That punch was weird it looked like you punched the air and it sliced the ukes torso
That boom kick was good and had much power
That transition after your boom kick was slow .. you tapped uke then you kicked which is pretty weird
That ending wasn't really needed .. you could have just ended it there because it was sloppy and slow
because u love having good poses ill give the pose a 4
7/10