.-. ok

broken arrows:

that glitch doe, nice opener anyway

slap was really nice, but u could get both pecs

boom was really cool

crap i sux so hard.

Aight,

Saikai [M]~

I wasn't quite fond with the opener itself, you quite seem to struggle at making switches during rotations, you make stops during switches and it results you looking a bit twitchy.

The build up in general was nice and appealing to the eye, the dms between 280 and 240 were good, the grab switch transitioning to the last two dms could have been pulled off better,the last DM didn't really add anything for me to the replay to be honest you were in an awkward position for it also it seems as if you extended your knee a bit late and the DM resulted in looking ugly.

The ending was alright.

will keep this in mind ty

you twitched in opener,but it looks cool,just try to don't twitch.
not much to say about first kick,but the second i can see a boom possible in there.
as well the other following hits.
the back-hand grab was possible to do a great decap,and grab the torso to make another boom.same thing on the other following hits.
but you looked great in the pose.

ok then here is something that is less fucked up.

a bit better.
the opener this time you got really good,and the manipulation got high.
but yet again,you hits can do booms and you don't do they,you manipulate uke perfectly,you just need to hit where is alot of joints.
and sometimes you don't hit uke clearly.
but its great,because manipulation was good,and is really hard to do they.

holyshitthatwasdelicious.

legitimately no complaints.

pusga: people do booms just to hide whatever shit is happening there.
ormo feg (forgot who):booms doesn't matter.the matter is what you do after them.
well i dont really care for booms coz i always fuck up after them.

also ty shiro-kun