Might just be me, but aint those "red whirls" a bit to small?
And the cheeks a bit to "dull" (not sharp enf like a V shape)
And dist between eyes are fishlike, (to huge)
And nose feels a bit flat...
Critics at its finest.
Other than that; Awesome.
Now doing recoloring for people not in the clan as-well, PM for more info!
PROUD OWNER OF THORN'S GOOD ENOUGH WRITER AWARD!