Toribash
Im working on a replay for myself. I plan to take a week, so expect good things

Ken, your replay is incredibly hard to get a boom on. The head really gets in the way. Try a kick from under the head instead of over.
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Oh, ill try to make a -9.82 and -30 replay.
Last edited by keoni109; Mar 13, 2012 at 05:13 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals
Zero, really good tricking. Although, before the second kick, your lumbar was awkwardly bent to the left. Also, there was a big pause in the middle of the first and second kick.
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Also cobra, try doing replays at 200 engagedistance. it might make openers and getting momentum easier.
Last edited by keoni109; Mar 14, 2012 at 05:06 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals
Here we go. Replay took a lot faster than I expected.
Attached Files
Keoni Ultimate Frenzy.rpl (181.8 KB, 5 views)
I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals
If you keep this up, you can be one of the best newer age replay makers

Epic.





Damnit how is he better than me
Alright, a fun ruining Akmal has arrived.

Your DMs are good and many. But it is the only thing you are good at. You should work on your openers, they are fluid etc but the flow isn't keeping up with the momentum. To fix that, try to HOLD a bit more. Yes, I said it. HOLD. I said it again. A nice mixture of relax and hold can increase the realism in your movements.

No matter how good you are at replays, pointing out bad stuff from replays is a good way to know your mistakes.

I'll rate it a 8===D out of a ( o ).
Thanks. I am making a new version of this however, because i have been playing around with the replay, and have gotten the groin, and 2 more dms in the first kick. I am trying to remake the second part of the replay.
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Also, gonna try what akmal says. I trust him
Last edited by keoni109; Mar 16, 2012 at 02:29 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals
Here, 2nd version finished. More dms, better pose.
Attached Files
Keoni Ultimate Frenzy 2.rpl (173.4 KB, 4 views)
Last edited by keoni109; Mar 17, 2012 at 03:13 PM. Reason: Forgot replay
I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals
LOLOLOLOLOL

XD
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btw kony isnt something to joke about
Last edited by keoni109; Mar 18, 2012 at 02:53 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals