Cool stuff, sorry if this seems rude, I'm not trying to be.
Don't start a replay with the toris in the default T position, looks weird and out of place.
Glow effects seemed out of place and weird.
Replay was really slow, speed it up a bit
After 0:17 video gets better, the CC looks really bloody weird but it's better than no cc.
Screenpumps are in time, gj.
Work on your free-cam, you're getting really awkward positions with the free-camera.