HTOTM: FUSION
Originally Posted by Cheshyre View Post
Hey modonali,

Your app has been posted.

Good luck.

thanks cheshyre also msg me or pm me god ive missed u
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Originally Posted by Cheshyre View Post
Hey modonali,

Your app has been posted.

Good luck.

Originally Posted by ifred View Post
You're in

lol thanks ifred ^_^
Last edited by modonali; Sep 23, 2016 at 07:23 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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After some voting, the results are the following:

Icon - gets Trial Period for Obey
Modonali - I am sorry buddy, but you will have to try once more if you are willing to become part of us . Stay cool and dont forget! Staying consistent is always nice.
Modonali's request to join your family #2
p.s hey guys i wanted to re-write my application again but id just end up writing the exact same stuff just a lil different i cant really re-write what i have in my first application attempt because that's asking me to re-describe myself with completely different information which would be hard and really time consuming but it would be a good way to show that im serious about joining.

I am 101% serious about my applications and my attempts to join.
If you guys request me to try a 3rd time i will do so and ill try and attempt to re-write my entire application from scratch to see if you like it better <3.
Hope you all understand and arnt too angry or upset that im being a little lazy about not wanting to re-write my application.






Greetings family members of "Obey".

My name is Modonali also known as Jayde in real life,im 20 years of age im and aries i also have tattoos got my first tattoo at the age of 16 and my 2nd for my brothers 18th birthday.

my GMT is (AEST) GMT:10:00+

I live in Australia, my ethnic is black Australian and swedish and some other far off ethnics from generations...what ever not important lol.




I make music such as rap,freestyle rap and some other styles.
i enjoy many types of music but I HATE COUNTRY MUSIC WITH A PASSION!!!! so if you like country music im sorry. ^_^

My favourite sports is basketball and mma/ufc.
i love anime,manga,youtube,my girlfriend <3, and my family.
I also love cheshyre hes an old friend from back in the day.

p.s sorry about all the spelling and non-existing grammar please forgive me i'm trying to be not to formal but formal enough. I've played toribash since 2011...yeah long time lol. im a 3rd Dan Black Belt though T_T i know such a low rank for a 2011 player.

my existing strengths would have to be that im friendly as f.... ^_^ hehe.
I'm also a very enthusiastic person and love to talk with people and have a great time.

my favorite mods would have to be: Wushu, Mushu, Boxshumushu,lenshu.
and many more.

also please check out my replays and let me know what u think <3.
Attached Files
death is life.rpl (46.7 KB, 3 views)
gentle.rpl (52.2 KB, 3 views)
insane skill.rpl (121.9 KB, 3 views)
insanity of the mind.rpl (105.8 KB, 3 views)
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we appreciate your effort but please wait a little bit longer before you reapply, maybe like a week or something like that.

pro tip, try to get to know the members a little bit before your next app if you're going to try again
Name : Dilan /Sunh
Age
GMT
Replays
Competitive game modes (or other strengths): i am trickeur ,sparreur, parkoureur
Some general stuff about yourself (we want to know about you)
And if possible, make it as thorough and interesting as possible:
I'm 14, I am French and my purpose in Toribash is to be the best trickeur,parkoureur and sparreur
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Name : Dilan /Sunh
Age: 14 years old
GMT?
Replays
Competitive game modes (or other strengths): i am trickeur ,sparreur, parkoureur
Some general stuff about yourself (we want to know about you)
And if possible, make it as thorough and interesting as possible:
I am French and my purpose in Toribash is to be the best trickeur,parkoureur and sparreur
Attached Files
Tricking test 124.rpl (611.3 KB, 4 views)
Football style.rpl (804.7 KB, 4 views)
Parkour Omg.rpl (2.08 MB, 4 views)
Raid challenge.rpl (1.68 MB, 4 views)
Spar avec prince eiky xD.rpl (1.60 MB, 3 views)
Eiky dead.rpl (351.4 KB, 6 views)
Last edited by Sunha; Sep 27, 2016 at 09:46 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Originally Posted by ifred View Post
we appreciate your effort but please wait a little bit longer before you reapply, maybe like a week or something like that.

pro tip, try to get to know the members a little bit before your next app if you're going to try again

sure i could wait but i feel that if i constantly re-apply asap it shows my enthusiasm as if im applying for a job and my resume is being re-submitted as much as possible to ensure my position.

please dont see this as disrespect but as my way of showing the up-most respect to the clan and to its members. I want to show you all that im 101% serious about my application and about joining and benefiting the clan as much as possible.

But if you insist on me waiting a week before re-submission of my application, i will do so as you ask.

p.s IFRED I LOVE U SENPAI!!!!! <3
also cheshyre i know ur busy these days brother but please try and find some time for your old friend modonali id love the chance to sit down and talk to you even for a minute or two it would mean alot to catch up with you and see how you and the family are how life is ect.
<3 thank you all for your time for reading my application and for understanding and replying to me.

also please check my new replay <3
Attached Files
momentum necksnapium.rpl (44.4 KB, 3 views)
Last edited by modonali; Sep 28, 2016 at 01:57 AM.
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Originally Posted by Sunha View Post
Name : Dilan /Sunh
Age
GMT
Replays
Competitive game modes (or other strengths): i am trickeur ,sparreur, parkoureur
Some general stuff about yourself (we want to know about you)
And if possible, make it as thorough and interesting as possible:
I'm 14, I am French and my purpose in Toribash is to be the best trickeur,parkoureur and sparreur
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Name : Dilan /Sunh
Age: 14 years old
GMT?
Replays
Competitive game modes (or other strengths): i am trickeur ,sparreur, parkoureur
Some general stuff about yourself (we want to know about you)
And if possible, make it as thorough and interesting as possible:
I am French and my purpose in Toribash is to be the best trickeur,parkoureur and sparreur

Please redo your application in free form way.


Originally Posted by modonali View Post
sure i could wait but i feel that if i constantly re-apply asap it shows my enthusiasm as if im applying for a job and my resume is being re-submitted as much as possible to ensure my position.

please dont see this as disrespect but as my way of showing the up-most respect to the clan and to its members. I want to show you all that im 101% serious about my application and about joining and benefiting the clan as much as possible.

But if you insist on me waiting a week before re-submission of my application, i will do so as you ask.

p.s IFRED I LOVE U SENPAI!!!!! <3
also cheshyre i know ur busy these days brother but please try and find some time for your old friend modonali id love the chance to sit down and talk to you even for a minute or two it would mean alot to catch up with you and see how you and the family are how life is ect.
<3 thank you all for your time for reading my application and for understanding and replying to me.

also please check my new replay <3

Yes indeed it shows enthusiasm and me personaly accept it as a good thing. But some of the other members think you are acting way too fast, so if possible please wait atleast like a week, after that feel free to apply ;)

Dont worry, we see you are enthusiastic so thats already a good point for you. But as I said in the paragraph above, please wait some tme before re-apply.
Yes indeed it shows enthusiasm and me personaly accept it as a good thing. But some of the other members think you are acting way too fast, so if possible please wait atleast like a week, after that feel free to apply ;)

Dont worry, we see you are enthusiastic so thats already a good point for you. But as I said in the paragraph above, please wait some tme before re-apply.[/QUOTE]

thank you for your feedback and i will wait for a week <3
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