@Mack: Pretty nice. Hell, it's awesome for a start. Keep it up!
@Gunk:
This i can CnC properly
The opener was non existent, as you went straight to the kick. This bothered me a bit. However, the kick itself was sweet. A bit stiff, but it's not a big deal in my book.
Follow up was ok, again, a bit stiff.
Boom that got the decap was really nice.
However, the kick after that decap boom was weird. I would end the replay after the decap if i were you.
All in all, good replay Gunk. You could work a bit more on your openers. Also, try to flow, like water, be gentle as wind...(went full zen there)