Conduct: Sorry for late CnC dood
Okay let's see.
The starter was okay, i don't like that position you did for the first punch, it's kinda weird how you had your legs like that but well, it works. The first punch was okay, it wasn't great, but it was okay. The second punch... the split don't looks nice with that punch :/, i think you should try to grab with that hand and then kick with your contracted leg, you may get a boom with that kick, who knows.
well, i think it's worth to continue.